funnyman46's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[itsRMP - Solutions]

I'm really feeling this dude. I like the sound, it sounds really professional, and I like the message a lot. I wish the rapper would change his inflection a little more often, though. I think it might sound a little better.

Good hook also, and good beat as well. Lyrics fit real well.

[Deep As Shit]

This track has slightly better vocal mixing than the other song I reviewed by you guys. The beat is pretty good, I like the Dilla sound.

Also, you should focus on making songs with more verses, possibly some hooks? Get people's attention. Doesn't have to be complicated. Just focused.

Work on the vocal inflection. I didn't hear your voice change whatsoever throughout the whole track, and that was an issue on the other track I listened to as well.

[Shit You Live To Hate]

The vocals don't sound mixed in right at all. Honestly, it sounds like a raw recording. Did you do any work on it? People don't like basic raw recordings like this unless it's like a freestyle. You said this was off a mixtape, so I expect to hear a song on a release of yours sounding crispy.

You have good bars though dude, good flow. The beat has promising aspects as well, but the synth line is pretty basic.

Plus the zone out part at the end is interesting.

PrometheusTheTitan responds:

glad you don't really like it! thanks for the review!

[For You, Signed Never]

This beat is super dope. Props to the producer.

But honestly, the MC needs to stop talking and start rapping. There is no flow there whatsoever, what's going on?

[The Hotel of Days]

The MC sounds awkward, his delivery is god awful. He's doing some weird thing with his voice where he's dampering his sound, but it also could be the weird mixing you have on the vocals.

I'm not saying you don't have anything to work off of man, both the producer and the rapper seem like they have the potential. The MC needs to work on his confidence on the mic, and making every word seem believable or even legible. Also, an important thing to maybe focus on is tightening up the flow. You have a lot of changeups, where you're switching from double time to single time. If you're going to do that, you need to have a precision flow.

Honestly, rap like you're living a movie. Think about how the person listening feels when they hear each line of your music, and how you want them to feel. The only way you can do that is if you deliver the lines with passion and the appropriate energy.

You've got a cool sound, though. Just keep working at it.

[Впол&#]

I feel like you have a good tempo with the beats, and a good structured beat. However, I do honestly think you could have done better with the drum sounds. Maybe add more sounds, or mix the ones you have a little better. The snare doesn't hit hard enough, and the kick sounds pretty basic.

Nice work with the sampling though, sounds like some old school 90's shit.

Libby-Shimmz responds:

If this track wasn't so old I'd probably go back and fix it. But I'm one lazy mofo so it'll probably never happen. That, and I like the drums. Thanks for the feedback. :)

[ambushremix WIP]

You know as generic as the beat sounds, It does stand out. Plus, it helps that the rapper really fits well over it. He's got a good voice, good delivery, not too bad rhymes, but he needs to be a little more steady, it's a little all over the place.

Also, don't worry about the vocals. They're fine.